Lynne Stringer – Author & Editor

 Leave Out the Parts Readers Tend to Skip

This is an odd rule. Leave out the parts readers tend to skip. And those would be …? And those would be just about impossible to predict, seeing as everyone is different.

Even in my breakdown of all ten of these rules, my difference of opinion to whoever created them is clear. I like the rule about not including detailed descriptions of places, but I don’t want it to extend to the characters. I want to use verbs other than ‘said’. These are things that matter to me, but clearly, other people have different points of view. So why on earth will we all skip the same things?

I think it’s important for all writers to write something that they would like to read, and in that kind of style, although certainly, rules like these need to be kept in mind. However, I think if we try to conform too much to other people’s guidelines, it can strip our work of its soul. I’m always reminded of Charlotte Bronte, one of my favourite authors. When she wrote Jane Eyre she simply wrote it as she felt it should be. Upon its release, it was instantly popular. However, she came in for a lot of criticism from critics who said that she should have done this or that, or not done this or that. So she bore that in mind when she wrote her second published work, Shirley. It wasn’t nearly as well loved as Jane Eyre, even by the critics. Whatever changes she tried to put into effect on the advice of the critics, they clearly didn’t work for her.

So I think we do need to listen to constructive criticism, but I think authors also need to listen to themselves. No one ever reads the same book as another person – the experience is different for us all – and I think we need to keep an open mind, but trust that someone will enjoy what we have written.

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  1. I loved reading Shirley – but I agree, it is not nearly as well known or loved as Jane Eyre. And I so agree with you on this one – not only is there a danger of stripping the heart and soul out of one’s work by slavishly following the rules (old or new) – there is the danger of producing thousands of carbon copy novels that will be “so naughties or ‘teens” in years to come. I appreciate the “rules” as it has made me think more carefully about how I write, has made some good points about how writing works and so, has, I think, strengthened my writing – but I rebel against following them without question.

  2. Yes, Jeanette. It was interesting to read Shirley myself in the light of everything I’d already read about it. Charlotte had trouble with it, not just with the story either; her sisters and brother died in the middle of it. That would make it hard to keep going.

    1. That would indeed make it difficult to write and not let grief to affect what one was writing. Shirley is such a strong heroine – and the story, from memory, more real than Jane Eyre. Maybe that was why it wasn’t so popular.

      I also enjoyed Charotte’s Villete. But then I quite liked Jane Austen’s Mansfield Park (which we did for Grade 12 English) – so maybe it’s just me.

  3. I HATED Villette! Mainly because of the ending, but also because it was so ponderous. I dragged myself all the way through and for what????